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This is my take on the scene from the deleted Thor scene just before Thor's coronation.

It's Loki's POV. Please tell me what you think. ^^
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This is an absolutely beautiful take on the deleted scene in Loki's point of view. I mean, if I wouldn't know any better, I would declare it and say that this little fic here IS the entire deleted scene that we so wish could have been in the movie.

Gloriously written and utterly beautiful for how you described Loki's character. He is sweet, possessive, and it only makes my heart ache further for him with what happens afterwards, as we all know in both Thor and the Avengers.

The way you write is most interesting; it's fluid, and allows a reader to move through your paragraphs and sentences as if they were smooth water. Moving from one action to the next is nice and well balanced with the amount of dialogue you have as well.

I love the original, internal thought that Loki has throughout, though you remained perfectly on target with how the original scene went almost word per word. Lovely job through and through!